All Comments on 'An Epic Dinner'

crap is Erotic????? 1*

Was SHORT and NASTY!!!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing. Now excuse me while I read it again!!

. . . the hell hath no fury crew!

Glad she got some pay backs on the SOB hubby.

wow, your right up there at the top when it comes to fucking a husband

and little dick just discovered. TK U MLJ LV NV

Enough said End of a marriage

Really does this happen, only in someone mind, nobody would sit and take it so i laugh at it as it is just a silly story,

I'm sure she awoke in the middle of the night to find a knife embedded in her stomach

Wifey's turnaround was just too quick. Otherwise everything worked well. Perhaps you could have had her telephone the secretary or look in Richard's room and find some photos. Then, she would call Wade into the kitchen and tell him to ask Harrison to keep Richard busy.

I liked the story - why does no-one have the balls when they make comment and always stay anonymous ?

so, is'nt most of the stories in here silly stories.

Grow up man, this is called fiction.

Erotic story? two stupid people who deserve each other.

Who keeps letting the teens write in here? Absolute garbage, only good thing about it was that it was short. Sorry I wasted my fucking time on this lame turd.

Her husband may have treated her "bad" but he gave her a good living. IF they are "wild" together, there's nothing wrong with that. And what's with the wife when a guy, WITH HIS HAND IN HER DRESS WITHOUT ANY OBJECTION FROM HER, starts telling stories about her husband fucking around and she just accepts it as a true fact without any verification or confrontation?? She just starts fucking the other guys and blaming her husband? Not a balanced story and not thought through. Sorry, 1 * in my opinion.

making this a garbage posting from a teen or ErotiKWriter is a pathetic, immature, loser... either way, this is garbage that should be weeded out.

Just because there is no ZERO.

WTF-you anonymous ASS. Read your bio again and tell me how much we know about you asshole. So sick and tired of asses like you spouting off your self serving bullshit. If it wasn't for the anonymous comments there wouldn't hardly be any on most of these sad stories. Go fuck yourself. Sorry writer, but pricks like that tend to piss me off. As far as your story, not too bad, but the sudden behavior change of the wife doesn't make sense. There was no indication that she was a slut, but turned into one almost immediately. Strange behaviour.

...just like Star Wars, Star Trek, The Lord of the Rings, all of Shakespeare and shelves upon shelves of stories written in almost every language on Earth. So what? It doesn't pretend to be literature, but it was well written and most of all fun to read. That means 5* to me.

This was nothing but a male bashing collection of shit written by a man hating lesbian. I'm stupid for having read it.

Very compact, but compelling. There are sufficient hints to Natalie's reservoir of resentment so that her transformation into a sexually predatory Medea seemed quite believable to me. Let narcissistic pricks like Richard beware!

The author must have a low opinion of women. First to think that a woman would put up with the shit she did to begin with. Then to believe that she would accept rumors with no proof. Finally, if she had been smart, she could have gotten proof, divorced her husband and lived quite comfortably on the settlement and/or alimony. Instead, for a quick bit of revenge, she will be thrown out on the street without a pot to piss in. All in all, a very stupid woman. Perhaps the author is female, naive and projecting.

If the story had included some evidence that what she was told about Richard was true, this would have gotten a five. As it is she based her reaction to the word of a man she barely knew, making her stupid.

You were so close, and missed.

She based her now cheating lifestyle on the word of a subordinate of her husband who was looking to get fucked. When Richard divorces her ass and she gets nothing she'll realize what a mistake she made.

And I ramble on...

HA

Ok Richard was sort of a prick for somethings but he did give her everything for a comfortable life. All she had to do is stand up for her self when he was being a prick. But, she was just a stupid woman who turned into a hateful slut in the blink of an eye. It appears that she was just looking for an excuse to be a slut. I agree with most of the negative comments as they are dead on in pointing out the flaws of the story. And there is no one to root for in this terrible disaster.

did you read the story you fucking cum sucker. The only prick was you for that dumb ass comment

for a great erotic story!! Loved it..

Making a snap judgement based on heresay and deciding to trash her marriage. Sleep on the couch? More likely she'd be sleeping on the front lawn after he throws the slut out. Hubby has the men's lives in his hands. They wouldn't want to jeopardize their careers so they would have been testifying against the slut in Court. So she's toast. There was simply nothing clever about the writing and the overall story wasn't erotic or fun to read. No stars.

didn't bother with his dinner but did take time to go to the kitchen and turned off the oven. The steaks where already ruined so he finished his drink and opened the utility draw removing a screw driver. Richard was a hard ass, he was known for his hard headed stubbornness but he was fast on his feet and quick thinking when a crisis arose. Harrison's body language told him all he needed to know about what caused Natalie's change in nature and he was taking his time to formulate a response. You see Harrison was a nephew of the Chairman of the Board and was deemed untouchable, at least that is what he thought. Richard walked up the stairs to the bedroom door, finding it locked he used the screw driver to release the privacy lock and entered the room, phone in hand, camera function on video. The wall light was giving a dim but adequate illumination, Richard placed the phone on the dresser facing the bed while listening to Natalie rant. He ignore the barrage of words but noted with a quick glance that the two bodies on the bed where naked and hard at it, Harrison paused for a moment to cast a smirk over his shoulder but by this time Richard was removing a travel case from the closet and loading a few items into it. A couple of suits, shoes and the case in hand, Richard pick up his phone and pulled the door shut on the way out. He took his time in the bathroom loading his personal effects and calmly walked down to the garage. Wade had cleared out, fearing a violent scene upstairs. Richard knew he had time to make the contacts he needed to, he had removed both Natalie and Harrison's mobiles and he pulled out the exterior land line cable, before he drove off to call on the Chairman and then Harrison's wife, you see there was no swingers club and Natalie was feed and believed a load of horseshit. Richard had all he needed for the pre-nup to be enforced and have Harrison transferred to a far away place. Richard knew his career in this corporation was over but he would extract a nice reference and large golden handshake in return for his silence and a revealing video. Life goes on. TK

The story was bad enough but TonyKiwi's "conclusion" was absolutely pathetic!

I have always maintained, the cheated on spouse has the right to balance the scales. For their entire marriage the husband has been condescending, controlling, and abusive. Not only has he serially cheated, but he has slandered his wife, destroying her reputation with false public stories of her lascivious behavior.

Hopefully she does not ruin her future by continuing to act in this manner.

For that night, her actions were justified. I respect her for taking them.

Even if submissives rarely turn into raving doms.

you take your pick.

Nuff said

How did that work out for her? Since you left the story unfinished we don't see him filing for divorce and using her "revenge" men to testify against her in Court. She would have left the marriage with her clothes, her maiden name and her car and nothing else. Is she really THAT stupid?

1 star

WAY TO GO ,GIRL !!!!.

3 or 4 paragraphs was enough to see that the husband was a total jerk. I refused to read further.

Once I saw he was bringing home "Two other men" it was clear this was another dumb assed cuck story.

She fucked them both I assume? Im not dumb enough to continue the usual by the numbers horse shit barely talented writers toss at us.

So if she didnt get the shit fucked out of her by someone, or someones, other than her husband, I'll gladly apologize. Likewise I expect the readers to get one from you if I am right.

I knew this was going to be a cuckold story within the first paragraph. It just telegraphed that way. I found the story very lacking in any emotion from either the wife or the husband.

Tony Kiwi from 6 years ago wrote the perfect end for this story. I hope his wife likes being broke and divorced. The adultery video should get him everything he needs from his ex-wife.