All Comments on 'An Erotic Adventure Ch. 01'

by BumbleeGumpwyld

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SexlessStiffSexlessStiffabout 5 years ago
Not bad

Thanks for checking your work before posting.

I enjoyed your first erotic pamphlet. Yes, very short.

If someone coming along the same roadway could have heard them going at it, they were indeed loud. A horse-drawn carriage, yes? Dang.

No 60" titties, no meter-long pecker...good.

I'll watch for chapter 2.

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I'm in college getting ready to enter the big scary world and am looking to have as much fun as I can before that happens. Writing's always been a hobby of mine, and I think smut could be fun, so stay tuned.