All Comments on 'An Erotic Fairy Tale, Part 1'

... but not sure what the SciFi/Fantasy angle is in this story.

Love the build up. Keep them coming

this is such a divergence from your long Paramours series that I can't wait to see where it goes. I already like these two characters and am cheering for them to figure things out. I do think the ending of this chapter was a bit too cliff-hangerish (I know that's not a word) and I agree with the anonymous poster that I don't see the sf/fantasy angle (but also don't really care). I did read past a number of typos that seem unusual for you, and hope you'll run future chapters past a copy editor--unless that will slow down publishing the next six installments :-)

And gotta love blonds with a bit of matching pubes!