All Comments on 'An Estonian Boy and His Family Ch. 03'

This is really good I can't wait for more hopefully this comment motivates you to make more soon

Thanks for the amazing stories

Very good indeed.

Hope we get a lot more stories from you.

The only thing that brings me back is a morbid curiosity to see if the story and writing skills could get any worse. Apparently they can. Alright, that said, I am off to read a story or two that are meant to be serious expositions.

It's to rapey

Just the right amount of domination. Great story! Keep up the good work!

Complete rubbish - especially from the standpoint of believability.

Learning grammar wouldn't hurt

It's been a good story so far, I hope you continue!

Native English speakers always like to point out grammar against non-native English speakers. And yet they are probably incapable of writing in another language. These types of comments are practically useless.

And there is also a demographic that does not like romantic incest. A warning at the top of the story would save you the hassle of explaining to them you're taking a different path.