All Comments on 'An Evening with My Mistress'

left me panting, wanting more.

The submissive role is complicated and demanding.

Thank you for sharing your journey.

I wonder why this story doesn't have the higher ratings it deserves. Is it because there is not enough graphical detail to satisfy the average reader?

We don't know what you said when you talked back. We don't know how exactly you were punished.

But those things are not so important. You tell the essential story, which is psychological. You offer details where it matters: a perfectly clean glass for your Mistress (a non-sexual detail, but very sexy IMO), her respect for the need to answer your mother's call. It makes your story and your relationship real.

Well written . . . thank you for sharing that with us. A bit too dark for my tastes but I appreciated your story. Keep writing.

Interesting!

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Hallo Cindy1001!

It's an interesting start, but your Mistress never took total control over you!... I couldn't tell if you were the submissive or the Dominant,,, yes!?!

Thank-You, 5-Stars and keep writing!

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The Black Queen and Gay Kat!

Deserves at least another chapter! The Mistress' comment on the brief yet painful strapping, "but for now it is enough." strongly suggests more pain lies ahead for her fearful sub!

Hi Cindy, this story should have a higher rating. I appreciate what you are trying to do. I'd love to offer encouragement (and, if you wanted, editorial help) for you to continue writing

Hi Cindy. I found your story interesting in that it was written from a different perspective to most. Anticipation and satisfaction can be very powerful factors in a story. i agree with others that your story deserves a much higher rating. Please do more.

This is a good story, a little short, but overall quite the experience.

Very good with, I hope, more to come. This can go much deeper.