All Comments on 'An Eventful First Meeting'

For your first foray into erotic writing, it was good. A bit short, but still a decent read. I read your post in the Feedback Forum. Write your erotica the same way you write anything else. Readers like stories with solid plots and characters they can relate to.

Good luck, and keep writing!

brilliant first story. love the writing. do hope there's now another part to this first awesome story.