All Comments on 'An Everyday Woman's Shower'

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walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 15 years ago
Excellent!

Well done! Felt like I was there--great work!

Nice2UNice2Uover 15 years ago
It's all in the details...

and the details are wonderfully evocative, erotic, and a tad wistful. Great description of the physical shower and what's in her imagination. Very sexy indeed -- well done!

More please...

bb4lsbb4lsabout 13 years ago
I liked it

Even if others may not have liked it as much, people think cause it's short it can't be as good.

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