All Comments on 'An Extreme Fun with an Unknown Lady'

Please work on your language my friend!

Disgusting Narration without story line

Not an enjoyable read.

That was a strange and difficult first experience for you if this is true. You should not be hit like that or urinated upon. It’s disgusting and disrespectful. If she is continuing to treat you like this, then you should find a different woman to be with.

Since English is not your first language, I believe you did fairly well for this first entry. Continue to read other people’s stories. This will greatly help you to improve over time. Good luck to you.

Your story was an enjoyable story .(.although with changes it could have been okay and sexy .) ~~.there should not be any hitting or urinated upon. It’s disgusting and disrespectful.