by hickoryfarmer
Very erotic (though not at all easy to follow) and what a clever Surprisie ending! Please continue creating and sharing your stories!
This is one of the best stories I have ever read on this channel. A combination or what was, what might of been, what could have been, and what really was, then with a wonderful twist in the end. Now I must read the rest of your submissions. I do not know whether I am thankful or regretful there are only 2 more.
Thank you for a wonderful well thought out and well written story.
Please continue to write. You do it so well
Mike S.
Once again you portray raw lust so well! The wanting nature of two unsatisfied women, one who gets it and the other who merely covets the lover. So well done and dare I say easy to follow if you are acquainted with a woman who is obsessive. Nice twist, again!