All Comments on 'An Incest Birthday Ch. 10'
by kevin_88
- 8 Comments
Anonymousabout 13 years agoNice chapter(as always) !
P.S. Please! Dont make them fuck their fake gf and bf.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoPlease Dont make them fuck there fake bf and gf it will break my heart! Ive nearly been in tears reading this chapter
there made for eacchother!
Anonymousabout 13 years ago3 things,
1. Please don't make them screw their fake BF/GF. That would be just wrong.
2. Don't let dad and daughter actually get together
3. most inportantly... Write more. The entire series is one of the best I have read.
kevin_88about 13 years agoAuthorhey everyone, i noticed you all feel the same way concerning some of the things happening. dont worry, i have it planned out right.
mafialadalmost 13 years agoi personally love the "i still love you but i can fuck everyone else" approach to these group sex stories. so, Rita's seething jealousy gets so annoying. i personally would love it if a giant, i mean giant, orgy happened. however, i realize thats not what this story is about. great read nevertheless.
Anonymousover 11 years agoIt's kind of odd that the mother knows how much they love each other and has not tried to talk them out of this horrible idea! Also, could this guy actually be that dumb or gutless? He has no fight in him at all.........yet. I certainly hope that changes!!!
Anonymousover 9 years agoI don't always enjoy multi-part stories, but I like the premise and the first 10 chapters do tell an interesting tale.
But I can't ignore all the grammatical errors and occasional sentence that is totally inarticulate. Also, there are issues of punctuation that are absolutely infuriating: especially missing apostrophes in possessives and contractions.
Anonymousabout 9 years ago19 year old twins with 35 year old parents? Taking off boxers with his cock thru the fly in his sister, magic.
