All Comments on 'An Incest Birthday Finale Ch. 01'

sad to see it's ending. this series is the first I ever read.

BORING

YYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWNNNNNNNNN

Still trouble uploading to xnxx? Hope it's up soon. Maybe people will look on this site for the next part until it's uploaded. Sad to see it end. Started reading when chapter 15 was released. Do have plans to do another series or continue writing stories after the end of this?

chris has become more insufferable but otherwise great work so far. hope theres more than 4 pages to finish this off.

Don't listen to the haters. This is moving from a sex story to a love story. Finish it on your terms. Looking forward to reading the last chapter.

A little slow, but I appreciated the attention to the details. As always, looking 4ward to the next one.

This is a great series. The idiots saying this is boring have probably not bothered to read the rest of the series. If they had, and if they had a brain, they would easily be able to see this chapter is more an expression of their love and showing how it has built over the course of this series. Do not bend to pressure, finish this story in the logical way you see it happening. Take your time if need be as well. Don't let it feel rushed! The people who have read this for years or months or even in one solid straight through reading know that this is worth reading a long chapter so that it ends on the right foot!

I felt like chapter 35 needed 1 or 2 more pages to finish it properly.

This is part 1 of the finale, he's not completed it yet.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

I hope part two is better, this one felt rushed keep up the good writing can't wait to read how it ends

Hey Kevin please give us some updates about when you are going to finish next part.

So I can stop visiting everytime to check if it's released or not

Whens the next chapter

So I just heard that somebody contacted him. Supposedly he is on vacation and won't be able to submit for another two months.

I knew their story wasn't done, but I still read it. Now I I'm waiting patiently for the author to finish it.

I hope we have a glimpse of the future with them in Seattle, or even Ashley reconnecting with her brother (but I guess I'd settle to the conclusion of this story arc).

Great story but happen to ch 14 ?

Man... i find myself almost skipping the sex parts in the story... I read thee story at least 4 times now. All i can say is: I'm a fan

I cant wait for the grand finale. Any idea when it will be online??

The wait for the next part is killing me!!!

Love your entire series! Great writer. Keep up the good work.

When is the next chapter gonna be its been forever

How long for the final part? It's been like 8 months. I kno it takes time to write and edit but it's getting rediculous.

When are you publishing the last part? I need to know what happens!

When is the last of it coming, you are one hell of a writer. I really cant wait till the next one drops. Keep up the good work.

I've been waiting for you to finish this story for a while now, how long until the last chapter comes out?

A reader on another site posted that he hasn't gotten any correspondence from the author since early February. He said it's possible that Kevin has passed on. I certainly hope not.

please keep this series going, too many things need to be answered......

the birthday celebration needs to completed....

how will things go once they move?

will either of the twins girls become pregnant in their future? etc....

When's the next part coming? I need to know what happens!

You have to finish the story. Too many unanswered details

You have to finish this story. It was the best emotional roller coaster ride ever.

Hey everyone, kevin_88 here. Theres no excuse for why ive been away for almist two years that would be plausible, but I have a pretty decent one. I went through some of the comments on this chapter and a few people were almost right in what they said. Lets just say one of the chapters in this series became a reality for me. Ive only just returned to normal status a week ago, and im ready to put that behind me. I know i probably lost a lot of dedicated readers and im sorry for that. My "incident" happened when i was only days away from posting the last chapter. I lost everything i had for it, but ive already started over in the second half if the finale, if anyone still wants to read it. Once again im sorry for the two year absence, but i promised to finish the story and i will. As usual, if you have any questions or comments feel free to leave them here or send me a private message. Thanks

I checked back often waiting for you to publish the finale. I'm happy you are back.

Post The Last Chapter Kevin Please

I have been reading your wonderful saga kinda' split between two story sites. If you post the finale here, a reminder to post it "there", too. Thanks for some wonderful reading. Sometimes it's better entertainment than video. This story sure has been that way for me! Welcome back!

Can't wait to read the final chapter hlad your back

i'm desperate to read the last chapter, but the first 35 chapters are FANTASTIC!!! great writing, story telling. the characters jump off the page and into your life. everyone is a 5 star story. I hope the "Finale" is coming soon. you may have lost a few readers - but i think you've gained a bunch as well. THANKS!!!!

I really love this series. I really hope you return to finish out the Finale. It'd be a shame to put so much work into such a great epic story to not finish when so close.

Hope you return to let us know the ending.

Really a great story.

I absolutely love it, it's my first erotica series and I'm so glad I started with it. Can't wait to see how it ends. I wasn't able to find chapter 14 though, maybe a glitch in the site or something. Anyway can't wait for finish the finale!

Every man deserves a Rita and ever woman deserves a Randy! Amazing love story!

I just binge read the entire series (with the exception of chapter 14). I am so ready for the conclusion of the story. It is a great series. Please don't leave us hanging.

I ran in to this series a long time ago, back in Lush Stories before they slammed the ban hammer on incest. I was happy when I found it here. Then I was saddened to see you were gone before you were able to post the final chapter. Glad to see you are alive. You made an appearance almost a year ago, but haven't said anything since, at least on this site. I know you are still trying to get it done, but I and so many other fans have been waiting years for the ending. Can we please have an update on how the story is moving along?

Please add in the final chapter its really getting to me

I have enjoyed every bit of your story so far. Can't wait for Finale Ch. 02 , hopefully before 2-1-2019.

Would also enjoy Randy &Rita : Adventures in Seattle. This is fiction so maybe have them visit a fictional Carribean Island for their birthday/anniversary and have the island permit incestuous marriage and have them married on the fictional island then later have them have kids.

This is not your story its on the site sexstories.com nivik_77 I believe. There will be no last chapter. Unless this guy makes it up but it would not be the same

Really, look at the name. Kevin 88, Nivek 88, it’s literally Kevin spelled backwards. It’s the same person dude , your probably not old enough to be on this site if you couldn’t figure that out

Where is the rest of the story u left it hanging that is sorry

Great story with great characters. Really wish it had gotten finished

I'm beginning to read this story and have a question.

Will Rita be intimate with someone else than her brother or he will be the only male she was ever with?

This whole series is great! but need the finale to finish.. cant leave us all hanging.

I read almost up to the end and decided to stop. I jumped to the comments and realized that the story wasn't finished. Man - very sad.

I really enjoyed reading this series, but you forgot a Ch. 14, and please don't leave us hanging. It's been 5 years since this was written, and it's time to finish it!

Fantastic Story but where's the ending?????

You split it in two halves, then failed to publish the second half. Or you published it, some moderator rejected it for some stupid reason, and you were struck by a car before you could fix it. Those are my theories. In the prior case, may the fleas of a thousand camels infest your tent, and may you never know peace, even in the grave. In the latter case, that same curse upon the misbegotten moderator who deprived us of the final half of this finale. As it is, I guess I'll just pretend that the previous chapter was the last one. It's not a perfectly satisfying ending, but it's adequate. This...is not.

So, I just discovered that this story, including this chapter, is also on Storiesonline. Ages slightly different, but otherwise identical. And it's listed as "concluded" in 2019. So this clown said "fuck it" posted the second to last chapter on Storiesonline in 2019, and marked the story there "completed". Lovely.

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Fleas of a million camels, I'm thinking. Also cockroaches.

You had us all worked up on their birthday but did not complete the end which is the ending of a great story. It needs a ending

Where is the rest of the story?

wtf

WTF!!!!!!!! I spent most of the last week reading this story only to find out that the second part of the finale wasn't published or whatever! Talk about a major let down! This is the second story I have read that was either not completed or just flat out left the reader hanging with too many loose ends.

Great story. Hope there's more.

What a crap way to finish a.beautiful story hope someone finishes it the way it should be