All Comments on 'An Innocent Touch'

by KallGirl

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Has great potential !!!

I have no idea what your plans may be with this story arc. But I think it has a potential for a muti-part story. In any case keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Could have been better

Needs a build up and far more details of them having sex

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