by pyrokat
I agree with the last comment, continue the story, you did a great job for 1st submission to the site.
This was so beautiful! I would love to read an ending.
Wow this was hot as. Please write more I have to know what happened. Thanks for getting me the wettest i have been in a while just from a story. Looking forward to more :D
Continue this story PLEASE!! Don't leave us at the edge (for some of us, literally :P)! We'd like to see a part 2.