All Comments on 'An Interesting Train Journey'

Jesus Christ! This was beautifully written, there is something so kinky about getting fucked on the child's bed, knowing his mom took cum from another man, than his father! Loved it!

Good story interesting and different. Check your sentence structure and spelling before you submit the next story.

The grammar in this was so bad I couldn't even finish the story. If your first language is not English then get a friend to help you out.

For all those looking for right spelling right grammar right pronunciation right punctuation.. Go read English literature classics and text books.. This is erotica.. N it's often written by people who may not be fluent in English.. That doesn't mean they can't try.. Instead of criticizing.. critique.. N if you don't know what that means look up a dictionary...

Oh n here are some spare punctuations for where ever you want to use them.. ' " :] } [{ ...

Take isn't sexy, you sick fuck.

Great short story of unwanted, yet unrelenting advances & trapped groping - which becomes needed relief through hungry compliance, submission and desire to please.

I don't know how long ago this was written, are there plans for more?

We'll done, Cheers!

same old crap woman cant say no, well i found plenty that certainly can