by JuilaDixon
Very Hot story! The Author takes her readers 'inside her character's intimate relationships' with another woman. Sexually stimulating,and very heavily erotic. A very good write; and an even better read.
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This sounds like a nice start to a very erotic ongoing adventure. My only critique was that the beginning seemed to be a bit jumbled when you were introducing the charactors and just entering the bar. LIke the rest of us the sex probably flows easier for you, yet if you take your time with the introduction by writing it and then letting it sit for a day or two before proof reading you can pick up mistakes a lot easier.
Hmmm, I wasn't sure I was going to like this story. After getting into it. I found it very appealing. Good story line. Very nice. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Makes a girl's mind wander....lol.
Hi, I came across your stories by accident and am so glad I did. I loved the story and the unusual way it occured made it all the more exciting for me. I am looking forward to reading your other stories in the near future and am sure I will not be disappointed. mmmmmmm thanks again
In especially liked it when Julia had to call her mistress "mommy". The only thing better would be if Julia's birth mother were next to her, humiliated and serving the queen along with her daughter!
Love your writing. This seems to be very fertile ground with lots of room for multi-chapter stories; Welcome!!
an imaginative, articulate, and creative writer like you. Why are they so short? There is so much that can be written about.
This is the first time I am reading your work and so far I liked what I read. I see that you have written 2 or 3 more of Julia's escort related adventures. I would love to read more and more of it. Please do continue this series further! :)
Nice story. And there really is a Cornhusker Hotel in Lincoln, NE. There was also a lesbian bar called Panic in Lincoln but, sadly, it has since closed.