All Comments on 'An Irresistible Temptation Ch. 01'

Don't ruin this by turning it into a harem story. /sigh. Oh well.

Fantastic story, really quite well done! The build up to their time together was wonderful and nicely set the stage. However, the fact that this was written by a non-American (probably a Brit) SCREAMS though and was distracting to me: words a and phrases like mum, carpark, motorist, signage, needing “fuel” instead of saying needing gas, proper meal instead of “something to eat,” a 7 Up instead of Sprite—I could go on as some jarring word or phrase occurred, it felt like, occurred in nearly every paragraph. Still the story line made up for it and I tried to ignore the imperfect American English. I give it a 5 for that reason, but on future stories I suggest having it edited by a skilled American writer. Thanks for sharing your lovely story!

Can't wait for the next installment...... 5*****

Fantastic story!!! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Absolutely Outstanding! Anxious to see where you lead us in the next chapter.

One of the best stories ive read greg25 never disappoints love this and looking forward to more really well written

Excellent read! Thriller, romance and loving scenes. Compliments and 5 stars of course.

EXCELLENT STORY young man. Very enjoyed it. Short,concise, suspenseful, and well written.

At first I thought where is the sex but then I got into the story and it was great, a well written tale which was entertaining and kept your attention and the sex was better for the slow burn builď up.

Many Thanks

She’s how many days without her BCPs?

I love stories that have a real plot in addition to great sex.

We’ll done!

Incredible story. A very well developed story involving more than just sex.