All Comments on 'An Itch You Can't Scratch Ch. 02'

Imagine my surprise when I saw there was much more tot he story than just the itch prank, the whole magic stuff and then Ash knowing just what was going on made the whole experience so much better. The best however is the final mutual love between the siblings, one that transcends even the magic spell of horny-cream. Now I'm really looking forward to possible sequels filled with genuine love between them, making love is always better than just plain fucking when you love someone, and maybe paying back the with with a worthy trick of their own. Ash did come up with this one after all.

5*!!!

Awesome sequel!

Very very good

Thank you

Good story! I wouldn't mind another chapter, but without one it's a great conclusion!

Wanna what happens with the siblings. Do the parents find out they fucked without the special cream. Does son & mom fuck again when dad is gon?. Does aunt & nephew fuck again? So many questions, be nice to get some answers. Please & thank you.

Congratulations!!!!!!

Very intense, i admit i have hoped someone would betray Ashley putting the cream on her too before she could fix the situation but this sweet final chapter is really cool. But the scene when Olivia start to masturbate in front of the dad without thoughts or awareness... was so stunning!

I agree

It's a decent place to end, but would be a good place to add more too. I and many others would love more I think. Thank for sharing

So many wish there was a special cream like this and a beautiful sister to go with the potion.

Good ending , but would love another chapter.

Really enjoyed it, a different kind of story. A little more Ashley if you do another chapter?

Good story. I didn't care about the Dad joining in but that is just me. Need another chapter with maybe Mom submitting to her desires for her son as well. Admitting he is better at sex then the dad. Then the Aunt admitting she wants and needs her Nephew as well.

@ Anonymus "I didn't care about the dad joining in but that is just me":

No, it's not just you!

I agree with some of the others. Dad joining in ruined the story. I think it would have been better if Dad had just stood along the wall in shock as Son Banged Mom and Sis. Also would have been better if Mom and shown up at the end wanting to join the kids again. Leaving Dad alone in their bedroom.

Perfect, maybe better than perfect ending to this tail, as the brother and sister perhaps step towards love, in the readers' imagination....

The tale of wicked exciting fulfilling all-encompassing sex amongst 3 who loved each other deeply from chapter 1 took a slightly darker turn

The middle was fraught with discomfort for many, but I think it was intentionally uncomfortable, not some mistake of the writer. The cream was clearly essentially a powerful drug, and beyond the control of most people, and the author showed us this. The author then told us this again, through her avatar in story (I like to think...), Aunt Ash.

Even with this almost poetic ending, another chapter ... I can see it, but, I will make no statements, in case the author has ideas of ... their own

Ruined a good story by involving dad

More?

Like the other comments I too think it would have been better to have had Dad just be an observer.