All Comments on 'An Odd Business Transaction'

The story changes as it weaves to and fro, but one thing is apparent; that which most of us have been lucky enough to experience at least once in our lives...the consumation of a dream of a perfect partner. And about time she resolved to stop providing for those freeloaders..keep writing!

any man or woman's dream come true just how true love should be

This story reads like the very defintion of erotica. It was a wonderful romantic and erotic romp with two endearing characters. Thank you for a great read.

A fantasy situation that could be reality, well expressed love long hidden, leading to a romance story in disguise!

I do appreciate good writing and well developed plots, and this story combines both.

Thanks

This was erotica at its finest, in my opinion. It is sensual and romantic and has a really good story behind it. It's not just "wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am" like some that I've read. Those stories are good too, but it's nice to read one that is more than just about sex and incorporates a lot of emotion as well.

I thoroughly enjoyed this piece.

Oh, My !!!!!!!!!

How sweet it is ....

Easy and exciting to read and for the reader to envision his or herself in the role of the two leading characters.

Please don't let this be the last ....

I loved all of it, except that he's a lawyer. Well written and sexy. I'd write more but I'm headed out to get some scarves.

Talented and a refreshing plot. thanks and please another chapter.

I love this story & love your talent. please give us another chapter

I'm trying to find a word - something that will convey what I think about this story. It's beautiful, refreshing, embracing, romantic, believable - probably the best story I've read in many stories I've read. I will keep this one.