All Comments on 'An Ode to Lust Ch. 03'

Great story series until you decided to introduce an incest pregnancy. I'm done with this.

So next best is a nephew she loves. She gets both. The baby she wants with a man that loves her .

What about his sister.

What about Kate?

Too many holes...

On one chapter,you said robert had many girls before...

But it was rita who took his virginity...

And then theres this...

Rita saying if she met robert 5 years ago,which he wouldve been only 13,she wouldve marry him instead of andrew...

Hmmm

Along with some inconsistencies, there's a bit too much purple prose, the author is trying too hard to make the writing fit an earlier time, but it just comes across as awkward.