All Comments on 'An Ode to Lust Ch. 04'

Outstanding. I want more!

This can't be the end. It should only be the beginning!!!!!!

You might make me forget what it'd feel to be with another man again.'

We learned earlier that she was a virgin, this is just one more inconsistency, like him wanting to learn what her lips felt like, after she had already kissed him.

If they actually love eachother why do they not harbor any thought of waiting, and getting married once he's of age? It feels jarring that from one day to another she just leaves when the estranged parents pop up.

Hell she could have decided to stay, she's an adult and a soon to be published author.

That anticlimactic ending puts a lie to many of their interactions, and the romantic progression the author tried to convey.