All Comments on 'An Ode to Uncertainty Ch. 15-16'

by ACDawnes

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
angry

The starting of the story was a good one but the moment u changed characters. The story started going downhill.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

The story started good it deteriorated, it's now nearly all sex and no story.

ACDawnesACDawnesalmost 4 years agoAuthor
too much sex

Thanks for the feedback, that's very valuable. We'll make sure to add more story and less sex in the rewrite!

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