All Comments on 'An Office Encounter Ch. 01'

You must give your readers a very special part II! Please don't make her act like a whore. You're writing is reserved enough to give her the opportunity to say erotic things without being vulgar.

This story can go in many directions. I'm sure you know which direction you want to take it. You will also be taking your readers there.

Yes! A BEAUTIFUL BEGINNING. Loved it, gave you a 5- (4.65 = 93%, ☆☆☆☆☆-)!

The "pretty young girl over there" is definitely a keeper. Full stop. End of story.