All Comments on 'An Office Romance'

Overall, a nice hot little vignette. This is a young woman's writing, I strongly suspect. Some paragraphs need to be broken up, some sentences run on, and there are punctuation errors, too. But very readable overall. The best part is the erotic tension she feels, not knowing how far he will take things. (Of course, we know!) It is nice to think that some young women might have erotic daydreams about older men, but most men of his age and accomplishment will turn down casual sex with a young employee. They didn't get where they are by exercising poor judgement. The large age difference augurs poorly, not to mention we live in an age of sexual harassment lawsuits. But write on! I hope you get your older man, too.