All Comments on 'An Officer and a Gentle Dad Ch. 01'

at Lieutenant. Nobody who’d been in that long would still be an LT unless they were a complete fuck-up.

Chances are he was prior enlisted, E6 or E7 that went to knife and fork school and changed over to the dark side. And usually prior enlisted officers aren’t fuck-ups.

I knew a few of those in my time.

I loved it, please keep it going...

Reading this at work was a mistake. The dynamic between the father and daughter is enjoyable. I especially like her comments on wanting to have his babies. I bet that promised blowjob would have been great, too. I'd like to think his daughter would also enjoy being taken on her hands and knees. Great read.

I love the relationship between them. I love reading about hard pounding sex, and I love reading about a special first time with someone you know will always love you. Not all of us were so lucky. Well written and very sexy story. Thank you!

Thank you for your comments! I've been working on a follow-up story and am trying to include some reader suggestions. If you read it, I hope you enjoy it as much as the first. Thanks for reading my work. -Roxy

Great story. Sex was very nice, but I also enjoyed the building up of the relationship

Don't leave us hanging! This is a rockin story. The relationship between dad and daughter was great. Good buildup and letting us get to know them a bit before having sex. And the sex was hot! Are you going to put a part 2 out? I hope so.

Fuck. This needs another chapter!

Dear Amelia and Anonymous,

Thank you for the comments. Yes, there's a chapter 2--since Melanie was a virgin, her dad has lots to teach her. ;-) It will take another month for me to proof it and give my editor time with it. But it's coming, and I hope you will like it.

Thanks for reading my work, Roxy

OMG yes!!! There is a chapter 2!! I will be eagerly awaiting!! Love your story/work!!

Great story of daddy daughter coming back together and both allowing themselves to take a step into a sexual relationship with a slow but steady build up .

THANK YOU for not doing what I find the majority of writers do and give him a 10inch Tall boy beer can size covk and her having EEE breasts .looking forward to reading more chapters hopefully

Who could argue???

OMG what a beautiful and sensual tale of love and desire between a father and daughter. I found myself tense with anticipation of their coming together. Thank you for not making this cheap and tawdry. A father/daughter mutual love for each other is all-consuming and should not be frowned upon by any part of society who has never experienced it. Thanks for bringing back such sweet memories of the man I loved the most. I look forward to more from you.

The bitch Allison just spoilt the story!!

Why the fuck do these stories have gals just falling into peer pressure, it is like theyre too dumb to think

Just a point of reference: a guy his age who's only a Lieutenant isn't doing very well. Should be a Commander at least.

Great story so far haven't read any involving the military. Can't wait to start next part well set and keeps you guessing as to what's going to happen. On to part 2. Semper-fi

So glad Allison is out of the picture. She was pure trouble.

I loved your story

Okay, I freaking loved this story. It gave my tummy butterflies, multiple times.

To answer the comment on his only being a lieutenant, He probably was promoted through the ranks as a LDO (limited duty officer). Next; great story line so why the need to clutter it up with baby issues?