by fabfables
Was an Ok-type tale up to a point. . the point where the panties turned into some flowers and grass, in the middle of a 3rd floor office. We are all willing to suspend disbelief, but Flowers in the Fax machine is just a tad too much.
Rating only 5 out of 5
Cheers, and Thank for the heartwarming,
Kilroy.
Thanks for the comment. This is part of a fantasy novel I'm working on and this scene will be critical much later on. Possibly doesn't work out of context.