All Comments on 'An Old Friend Returns'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Just Checking the Category . .

Was an Ok-type tale up to a point. . the point where the panties turned into some flowers and grass, in the middle of a 3rd floor office. We are all willing to suspend disbelief, but Flowers in the Fax machine is just a tad too much.

Rating only 5 out of 5

Cheers, and Thank for the heartwarming,

Kilroy.

fabfablesfabfablesover 13 years agoAuthor
Fantasy

Thanks for the comment. This is part of a fantasy novel I'm working on and this scene will be critical much later on. Possibly doesn't work out of context.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I wish he and Karen could have gotten together.

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