All Comments on 'An Older Sister's Awakening'

Can't rate this. Lesbian sisters ain't my bag.

All sisters should experience such uninhibited sex.

Awesome story, love the path they took to their vision of love....

Excellent writing!!! You’ve got the gift of the written word!

As a male , That’ to me is a true account of a life experience, well written too .

I can see more from you in the future

Just Amazing congratulations on a fantastic story more please 😃😃❤😉

Loved the idea but really needs a proof reader - 'lied' rather than 'lay' way too many times for me, making it a big distraction.

Lexi

I echo the need for a bit of editing/correcting. Not a fan of anal at all, but this is very nicely written and sexy.

Really like your writing style, despite peoples grammar criticisms. Would have liked more of a build up and the details of the 'first time' though. Feels like it's a huge jump from 'Over the next couple of weeks, the showers grew more comfortable' to 'we had been intimate before sleep'. Still, looking forward to more your work!

Thank you Lexi for your feedback. I am re-editing the story and will submit a corrected version ASAP.

Wonderful, expressive story of your sexual awakening!! Great writing and very detailed. Loved it. Keep up the good work... I especially loved how you found or were drawn to her anus. Such a sensual, erotic, erogenous orifice for us all. Thank you.

Did this actually happen?

I’m a guy but have to say that was beautiful, love the build up and yes there was the “ jump “ but very descriptive which I liked . Keep it up , can’t help but think it was based on a real experience which added immensely to the story

awesomely intimate. I'd love to hear more about the showers, the first time you touched her breasts, and she touched yours. You went pretty fast over that....Maybe a second story?

It made me very wet and very happy.

Want more. Please?!

That was amazing!!!!!

I think this was a sweet slow burn story. I did sense the gradual increase of sexual tension between the two. Courage, and probably sexual tension created by the younger sister’s boyish description and hard body, took over the older sister’s inhibition as she gave in to her attraction for Em. I thought it was a sweet and gentle story.

Loved it!! If you only knew how it home with me.

Love the story. Love the honesty. Love the author

Incredible, so vivid. Thank you for the adventure

love it very nicely written. i found it to be quite exciting.

Great story, nice build up, beautiful description of the exploring the boundaries and the shared joy

Beautiful story. I remember the first time I saw my two sisters naked in bed together. Walked in on them and just stood there watching them kiss and grind their bodies.

Thank you all so much for your positive feedback, it means a lot. I haven't been here for a while. As for a next chapter? I've tried writing a follow up a few times since the last one, but they just never went anywhere. Since I write from personal experience i feel my stories should be meaningful, so I'm not going to just manufacture something out of nowhere. I am helping a friend with her own story right now, which is why I'm logged in at the moment. Perhaps working with her will get me unblocked and I can get my own story going again. :)

Love it!