All Comments on 'An Older Woman and Then'

What a cast of characters. And most of them don’t deserve to be breathing the same air the rest of us do. I was thinking, Lee seems like the kind of guy who needs to have his dick cut off and stuffed in his mouth. But then he met his match, Rhonda. What a woman she was. One Star.

What is a "macro mini skirt"? That self-contradicting! That was the worst of the many glitches in this story. Not well written at all! From what I saw as other scores for your work, it seems as if you may have some talent. However, if you do have any talent, you didn't apply it here!