All Comments on 'An Online BDSM Tale Ch. 01'

I don’t appreciate phone sex but this I appreciated so, so much

and I hope there is more to come. Thank you.

Very good start! You've got me hooked and I can't wait for more!

Looking forward to more!

Shame on you! I went to check for part 2 and found nothing! There better be a 10 page chapter coming soon.

Great start though! You've got an eye for casual cruelty and a conflicted mind.

This is going to be good

I really liked this story, and with your talent it could build to a really great series. I hope you return to complete it :)

It's a very well written, realistic story. Love the very real characterization, I think a lot of people can identify especially with Sarah, though, you really wrote that curiousity of first-time-users on such websites just fine. Overall it's a nice story that makes you somewhat feel like you're living through it as well. You really have talent for writings. :]

THIS IS SO GOOD! You are amazing at this, and I was hooked. Need more now!