All Comments on 'An Orgy in Venus Villa Ch. 01'

But is English your second language? Ideally you need some help with editing.

The translations are just distracting. Either post in English w/o that other language or post to a native language site.

Thanks for wonderful story.

As a European I find stories written by Indians and set in India hugely erotic and arousing. Indians seem so strangely sexually powerful.

You write in such a direct, open sexual way. Do not understand any Hindi but it is very erotic in your story.

Thank you!

European couple who admire India and Indians.

excellent my friend kee going and more raw sex and lots more conversation!!! nice piece

Welcome Canine,

Thanks for the encouragement for the story as whole and particularly dialogues.

Will be posting the next chapter soon.

Thanks.

Yes, that is right and I could find errors and need for editing. Now lot more people communicate in English, many times over than the Englishmen and Women..

But I will try to look deep and edit before posting.

Thanks a lot

Point taken but I had other perspective in mind, as well.

Many Indians read Literotica these days and for many, reading Raw Hindi dialogues are more exciting than perhaps mere English ones, particularly in situations where the characters are hot blooded rustic villagers, enjoying sex.

I have had opportunities to hear rustic Indian village ladies talk about sex in absolutely open way and even teaching to younger girls, how to enjoy every kind of sex and avoid pregnancy.

Thanks for the comment and suggestions.

Thanks for this comment anonymous reader:

Keep reading over and over.

Comments:

Can't get enough of Arun with his monster cock fucking the ladies. Fascinated by a fantasy of this big cocked, commanding Indian man using an English couple visiting India. The English wife turning into whore for Arun while helpless, sub white husband admires Arun's huge cock as Arun becomes their superior master. Thanx for story!

The way you narrated the story is nice. It would nice if were to be a bit closer to reality. However they wording and the heat you tried to create are good.

Thanks for the appreciation. It is a mix of reality and fiction. Some times, reality seems like fiction.

Hope you have read this story and liked it ...some how unable to open Lit messages.

See you on chat soon.

Hugs

M