All Comments on 'An Outback Experience'

You need a spellchecker and to understand tenses. You also need to write with flexibility so that you don't just concentrate on the end result. There was no build up or anticipation of the event.

Very poor. No idea why it was published. This site is increasingly full of mediocre writing.

Nine paragraphs does not a submission make!

Don't be disheartened by negative comments, some people write their stories as they think them and they don't all have the correct structure.

We are not all writing artists.

This site is for people to share their thoughts, fantasies and experiences as they happen or as they are written.

Keep writing and hopefully someone from here will offer you help.

Look forward to reading more.