All Comments on 'An Unanticipated Curve'

by Richcranium

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newtype2525newtype2525over 2 years ago

Holy SHIT! Welcome back!

And thanks for such a detail and erotic story! Though I might need to point out that dreams are fun but this could certainly move into reality! :)

I loved it! Please say that you are writing more and maybe (just maybe) your "Father-in-law" story might see another chapter or a similar retelling within this "Curve" universe!

Thank you once more! Cheers!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Glad you are writing again. I'd love to see more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very well written and perfect pacing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Kinda wish it wasn’t just a dream. Kinda ruined it.

LegallySaneLegallySaneabout 2 years ago

Glad I read the comments first. Not into reading about someone's dream. I'll pass.

Beholders_EyeBeholders_Eyeabout 1 year ago

Did not like that the Aunt had to be extremely drunk. Much better when the parties are in full possession of their faculties to appreciate what they're doing. Also that it was just a dream took a lot out of the story .

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