All Comments on 'An Unbreakable Desire Ch. 04'

More please

I love this!!! Please keep writing!

Aside from the regular missing words and grammar, the storyline is actually very good.

So far, Zero and esp. Eric are highly interesting and entertaining to read about. I know that Zane is young and we will see more of his maturing, but please stop letting Lena slap him left and right. It shows that Lena's tough in a way, but makes Zane look so weak and not alpha enough. Nothing worse could ruin our hero's sex appeal by being slapped time and time again and being pussywhipped by a girl.

Now that Zero killed James, let's just suffice to say that there will be no love triangles or conflicting emotions for Lena. I'm highly interested in Zero however since he's volatile and it's always fun reading them. He really does steal the limelight so far from Zane. Taller, older, fiercer, sexier, fiestier..bring it on!

Thank you for the update! And please do continue to finish this awesome story. I love it!

Must you leave me once again @Searchforme? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I had to wait a whole year for Chapter 3! It's a crime to not share this talent with your fans! LOL I will be checking daily for Chapter 5 :)

Please update your readers on whether you will continue this story so we know whether to keep it bookmarked. I'm really hoping that Lena has her day in court with the deranged Zero. He's had news.

I hate when great stories such as this remain unfinished. This is easily in my top 2 favorites if only you'd finish it.

I know that life can get I the way but this story is really, really good. Its worth finishing. Please.

Agreed with the previous comment. I’m going to assume you’re no longer active but I’m really glad I got to read this! This story has so much potential so I really do hope one day you’ll be able to finish it. Hope you’re doing well xx

I can't get enough of this story. It is perfectly written. I need more. A lot more.

This is amazing plssssasssss conclude. Lena is a flawlessly written character.