by Tales_of_tea
Well, simply the most fantastic fantasy that I have ever had the pleasure of reading. OMG, I wish I could find a place like that for my wife. Simply brilliant writing. Thank you, Thank you! I could double the star rating if I could.
Kind of a Bolero tale - A slow build-up to a crashing climax. Not an ounce of suspense, but a very pleasant ride. Everyone should have an experience like this once in their life. 4*
Thank you both for such great feedback. I’m glad you enjoyed my story.
Somewhat predictable but nicely paced. Some typos, and the Italian dinner was less than elegant; more of a carb load. But overall the buildup was good and the sentiment finely expressed: we ought to treat our partners like the goddesses they are! I wish I could give mine a similar experience. Why not try . . .!