All Comments on 'An Unexpected Birthday Surprise'

The story left me wanting more.

A good read. Thanks

Great little story.

I think that this could b a great introduction to a few chapters developing the relationship with Michelle from next door. Very hot and a sensually horny story. Keep it going.

Good story, held my interest. I hope you create more chapters in this adventure.

Boring. I was ready to blowy brains out by end of second paragraph. Don't know what was so likable in the story. Methinks the author paid for positive reviews.