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Click here"Turn around, Ryan..." he whispered sensually. I turned face-up, releasing the pressure on my crotch, and my cock was greeted by Luke's wet lips, the tip of his tongue circling around it, as he began sucking it, taking it all in. I savored the sensations, as I watched the man of my dreams, my old friend from childhood, tasting my manhood, enjoying the act of giving me pleasure.
I was starting to get close, I spread my legs around his arms, allowing him to go down a bit deeper; the feeling of his short bristles on my balls, the look of desire on his face, feeling the tip of my cock bottom out his mouth: I couldn't resist the innuendo, and so shortly after I started mumbling I was getting close, I read in his eyes he wasn't going to stop, and when I came, he sucked all the way to my crotch, swallowing my cum until the last drop.
I was spent, and so was he; we laid down in bed beside each other, slipped under the sheets, hugged to warm each other up, for the soft feeling of the human skin, the tenderness and affection of intimacy.
That was going to be a nice Christmas.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agoI share some of the same concerns as others expressed about Luke. He seems a muscular, well built guy, sexy in all the right ways, even with some body hair, and that bog cock. If he had been a little more loving, even gentle, in his approach, we could have understood the sex. But because they seem to be falling for each other, even to the point of love, doesn't there have ti be some forgiveness for the brutal fucking scene? Luke's sucking of Ryan might be a start, but I think Luke has some making up to do before he can be making out, if you know what I mean. I understand male to male attraction, but I guess I shy away from the rush and brutal side in preference to a tender, more loving touch.
CuriousPeteover 3 years agoGreat Story
Really loved the story and the build-up. Yes, the aggressiveness was a bit hard to take but then you've expressed your reasoning in your comments. Really enjoyed the hot sex and look forward to reading Luke's back story and more hot sex with Ryan.
cayde7over 3 years agoAuthorHairyJacques, thanks so much for your comment! You explained it much better than I could, this is pretty much the depth I was trying to give to the characters. Everything you stated is on point, and I'll do my best to try and tell more of the sentiments involved in those moments of intimacy; having experienced myself, in a way, these conflicting feelings (wanting to please your partner, while also being in discomfort), I wanted to convey the intricacy of these situations, and how part of you wants to keep going, even if you're out of your comfort zone.
Also, I'm a huge fan of your works (Male Sorting is one of my all-time favorites), and seeing a comment of yours was really a big confidence boost! Thank you :3
HairyJacquesover 3 years agoFor me, Ryan's ambivalence about his first sexual experience was a highlight of the story. It helped make it seem real. We know nothing about Luke's sexual history, but given his more worldly nature and muscular body it's almost assumed that he's been around the block a few times. It's not surprising that, as Luke states, he presumes that Ryan shares his level of experience. He would have been more tender had he known that Ryan was a virgin, but he didn't know--so he wasn't very tender. He was a horny soldier acting impulsively in lust. And although Ryan experienced discomfort when he was being throat-fucked and when he was being penetrated, he didn't really protest. He was craving Luke. He was craving the sex he'd denied himself up to that point. And he was processing everything--and everything was happening so quickly. So one part of him was feeling pain but on another level he was overwhelmed by lust, gratitude, and a desire to please a man with whom he was falling in love. We've all experienced conflicting feelings like these. Thanks for revealing so much about Ryan and depicting his complexity. I can't wait to learn more about Luke.
PG564Eover 3 years agoMmmm. . . to have a big cock like that in me, in my mouth, and deep into my ass. I liked the dialogue between the two, and the sex was hotly described and made me very hard. I liked that you wrote about the burning sensation of a man's cock probing a tight anal tunnel - that was a sublime pain I felt in real life when I first sucked dick and asked a hung guy to fuck me. Want to read more!
