All Comments on 'An Unexpected Family Pt. 01'

Never, ever in the history of baseball has a first baseman lead the majors in stolen bases

Nice well told love story. Looking forward to the next installment.

To Anonymous ... from the author ... Thank You for your comment ... I’m impressed you bothered to research the stolen bases ... fyi ... also, in the first part, a 3-5-6-3 triple play has never been turned. To all readers ... take note, I place the search tag, “fantasy,” in all my submissions. If you find a theme in my submissions hard to believe ->> fantasy. Star Wars & Star Trek are fantasy, also. A.J. Roye. 11.3.2021.

Great romance and excellent writing. I have to say the sex scenes were crazy hot and I'll be interested to see Jack and Bernice take the next step.

Loved ust about all of it, but I thought the foursome was a bit too much. And I skipped much of it!

Yet another great story from this author. Lovin' it.

THANKS