All Comments on 'An Unexpected Massage Ch. 03'

Maybe for the next chapter Bob has to return again the next day and Sophia wants another chance to fuck him properly. And because Jennifer now knows who Bob is, she contacts him and arranged a meeting in his hotel room.

Then after going home his wife finds out about his escapades and decides to investigate the massage parlor and has her own meetings with Emily, Julie, and Sophia (perhaps even Bob is part of them)

Either way they were great chapters to read. I really hope there are more chapters soon.

Great read, can't wait for you to continue

This emotional connection needs to be followed up on.

Maybe Bob needs to evolve into a more emotionally developed human by going through the angst of discovering that these women offer him a lot more than his wife or his shallow business.

Fairly realistic but the timescale to go from a happy ending to a blowjob to full sex is far too short, these ladies won’t do this that fast. Also, no condom? That would take longer too

Therefore you have the basis for a longer, more realistic, story.

Jason’s blonde wife was a distraction. Only use her if it advances the story

Great Job! An easy & sexually charged read. I love that the customer, Bob was called into service the woman in the next room. Both she & Bob responded as one might hope. I have been in that position with far less satisfactory results.

It’s been almost 4 years since the start of your writers block. Hope it ends soon to continue this story. It was really good.