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Click hereIt’s been almost 4 years since the start of your writers block. Hope it ends soon to continue this story. It was really good.
Great Job! An easy & sexually charged read. I love that the customer, Bob was called into service the woman in the next room. Both she & Bob responded as one might hope. I have been in that position with far less satisfactory results.
Fairly realistic but the timescale to go from a happy ending to a blowjob to full sex is far too short, these ladies won’t do this that fast. Also, no condom? That would take longer too
Therefore you have the basis for a longer, more realistic, story.
Jason’s blonde wife was a distraction. Only use her if it advances the story
This emotional connection needs to be followed up on.
Maybe Bob needs to evolve into a more emotionally developed human by going through the angst of discovering that these women offer him a lot more than his wife or his shallow business.