All Comments on 'An Unexpected Submissive 06'

Please tell me there's more!

HURRAY FOR LOVE!

Love the ending. Looking forward to Alexander POV

This extremely emotional chapter stirred many of my own memories and thoughts and I found myself wanting to say so much in my comment as I read on. But by the time it ended and with such a brilliant ending, all I can think to say now is, WOW!

I was in tears throughout out the whole chapter!!! Can't wait for Alexander's POV!! Can we get one last scene after they declare their love...pretty please

I'm sad too see them go. I hoped for more in the end when they faced each other after the letter. It felt like so much build up and grey had so many reasons for k it not to work and in one sentence alex just accepts. But i liked how you presented that chance for Alex to be more and for grey to knock down some of his walls. It showed Alex felt more and cared deeply. I would love to get his side like you promised.

Wow. A wonderful ending. I was so afraid that Grey would insist they part. I love that Grey is getting a happy ending and lifelong companion! I'm glad there will be an epilogue and look forward to it as well as Alexander's POV. And finally, yay Jake! A real friend.

I very much hope you continue to write and here here.

What an amazing journey you’ve written for Grey and Alexander. Knowing that we’ll likely see and hear them again is exciting even though this is enough. Through your words I can see them and I can hear them and that is a testament to your gift of storytelling. Dark? Yes. Beautiful? Without question. Bravo.

This is such a beautiful story. I love everything about it.