All Comments on 'An Unexpected Surprise'

I think the premise is fun and there is a lot you can do with the characters. However, this story seems very rushed.

You don't get into detail when you state you and your friend 'played with' each other. You don't comment about the bar: What is the vibe in the bar? Have you been successful there? I think if you gave more detail about you and your sexual orientation and experiences, the actions you and your friend take with the woman would have made more sense. There was no real surprise element.

I would also recommend you working with an editor. The editors I have worked with on this site are really good and very helpful.

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I only wish there was more. Which is a nice problem to have.

It's great to have a friend who will suck you when the time is right. Fun story. Well done.

Lucky guy. That’s my fantasy. To be dp’d by a trans and a guy.

Hot stuff...I'd love to have a couple of friends like them!