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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Not bad

At all. Very good first story. I agree it could have been a bit longer but nothing horrible. I'm curious, had Mandy ever been with a woman before? Very good either way. Keep on writing. Another chapter here perhaps?

3 stars

DragonRider55

AnonymousWriter244AnonymousWriter244almost 6 years ago
Good job

Excelent first story. I really enjoyed reading it. It could have been a little longer, you know, more depth into the characters and backstory. I'll read more of your work in the future. Take care and keep writing.

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I'm from South Africa, I enjoy writing, camping trips, quiet times with friends. I'm a junior graphic designer, love to create things and aiming higher. At this point I'm strongly drawn towards other women, particularly older women. I am reserved at times, fairly simple in wha...