All Comments on 'An Unforgettable Melody Ch. 07'

good story. I also like the fact that it the next chapters comes quiet quickly

I was a bit worried something had scared you off when there was a bit longer wait for this chapter. Welcome back. Like the setup of Darcy and Stuart, Darcy needed a better bf.

Ok so I am a selective reader and it takes a pretty good writer to get my attention. Names like Terry goodkind, Melanie rawn, and Margaret wise and tracy Hickman are the authors that always caught my attention. With that said you have really captivated my attention and if you haven't already published a book I would seriously recommend you look into it.

All in all please keep writing me chapters. Yes I enjoy the sex scenes and I would love to see if he delves into the role plays a little. But I truly love the building of the charecters and am genuinely interested to see who he meets in his new job, see how melody and the church girl develop their relationship, see what her thoughts on religion are, know what the locket means, and so much more.

Parents didnt notice or seem to comment on the lack of glases that there son had. Previously worn. Also mikes friends havent noticed.

People are weird about not noticing things that have always been there. It's also possible they mentally dismissed it as contacts.

Most of the authors on here, even a lot of the better ones, at this point in the story would have started moving to get Darcy together with Mike, rather than with someone else, as the start of a "harem" for the protagonist. I'm so grateful that you didn't go this direction.

So far, this has probably been the most enjoyable read I've ever had on here. Not necessarily my favorite, the most interesting, or most arousing, but the most enjoyable. I've caught myself grinning stupidly at my monitor while reading the dialogue at at least one point each chapter, to this point.