All Comments on 'An Unlikely Alliance'

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SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunabout 1 year ago

Lovely. Really well done, as always. Glad to see they worked things out to find their happily ever after.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 1 year ago

You find love when you're open to it!

5

Ravey19Ravey19about 1 year ago

Excellent story, loved the animosity at the beginning and thought they'd be the couple. Thought there might have been more about the anger issue but he seemed to be getting it under control. Songs were an excellent choice and worked very well. Thought the end was a little rushed but you conveyed their love and you're the writer, not me. 5⛤

oldsage_1oldsage_1about 1 year ago

Great to read a love story from a Ladies perspective and you write so well. Thank you for sharing your fantasy and your talent.

Cheers

SAGE

Bronco56Bronco56about 1 year ago

This is wonderful romantic story. It was a fun and enjoyable read. 5stars

jflindersjflindersabout 1 year ago

Nice story. I was surprised his anger problem never showed up again after the first date.

Perhaps the thing that I'm most curious about is how many comments this story gets pointing out that "All I Ask of You" is a duet between Christine and Raoul, not Christine and the Phantom.

davp6255davp6255about 1 year ago

an extremely well written love story.

rnebularrnebularabout 1 year ago

Loved it. Not sure what else to say, but this was a good read and a nice romance. Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent with us.

Rnebular

KachinaDollKachinaDollabout 1 year ago

I loved it. Yes, it was a teeny bit predictable but that didn't detract from my enjoyment.

RicknCenFlRicknCenFlabout 1 year ago

Enjoyed the slow development. Well done.

olddave51olddave5112 months ago

I would like to know what was the relationship between Casey and Grant?

Why was Grant so out of sorts when they first met?

I did like the story 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I love your writing but need to correct the credits you started this story with.

Celine Dion only cowers The power of love, the credit should go to Jennifer Rush who wrote it and made it popular in the eighties.

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