All Comments on 'An Unlikely Romance Ch. 07'

I have followed this story and find that it disturbs me so very much and yet I keep coming back. I realize it is just fiction and you have done a marvelous job in writing it, but it so disturbs me like a horror movie. Part of me wants to congratulate you for such a great story and part of me wants to utter "you are a sick {blank}". i will be waiting for the epilogue to see how this ends.

Just picked up on the series and read to here in one sitting. Two seriously disturbed people have found each other, but are the compulsions really gone for good. Somehow I just can't see these two living happily ever after with her appetite for sex and his sordid past.

But, having said that I anxiously await the final chapter and offer nothing to help your ending.

it will become an actual romance, it was craving for a dark ending

So no more is said about the video evidence of the murder? No zoom lens to see the burn scars on naked killer's back?

With all its twists, this story did hold my attention all the way to the end. I thank you for the entertainment. :)

Awaiting the epilogue...

the remains are still there waiting for clean-up,,TK U MLJ LV NV

I'm very impatient so rather than leaving feedback I'm going to the next one and I'll talk then.

The stuff with Jessica was shockingly lurid. The scene with Emily and the proposal give me hope!

Do you realise just how big a 24 carat diamond is?

I have to say this is a much darker series than I am used to, and a bit tough to get through at times. Very well put together, and the only thing that seems off to me was the drug/memory session. I understand that the back story was crucial to developing Simon, but the way it was relayed with rooms was odd to me. Anyhow thanks for writing this and I look forward to the epilogue.

if its your writing, or my tendancy to read these stories....these two are flawed characters, each with an experience that shaped their lives, should they be absolved from it all, in a pure world, no, but the world isn't like that, should they be allowed to live their lives together, that's an unknown because im sure these urges and monica rages just as much as simon does, that it hasn't disappeared from their lives, they will struggle till the end