All Comments on 'An Unnaturally Natural Desire Ch. 02'

by CraveTheNeed

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
So intense

Wow ! So well told that I was in her father's place and felt every movement .

Great story .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Loved it. I have read both chapters, and they were great. I love how there is both attraction and love in the story. Hope there are more chapters to come.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 14 years ago
Excellent.

That was so well done that my pussy is drooling. I swear I could feel everything as it happened. Thanks and please keep writing.

spearman1spearman1about 14 years ago
Awesome!!

Really awesome.

Colorado ScorpioColorado Scorpioalmost 14 years ago
:)

Very nice and sexy, loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Nice story. You should let him get her pregnant.

stormy0628stormy0628over 13 years ago
Awesome

Awesome story. I hope there are more stories coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Excellent story

I really enjoyed both parts of this story. Please tell us more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Beautiful

This is a beautiful and fucking hot story. Loved it and want more! Please write several more chapters!!!! The story line is great with just enough background to make this an outstanding and throughly enjoyable read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
loved it!

Your story was awesome! Brought to mind the juiciest memories for me! I enjoyed your descriptive writing and hope you continue the story. I agree, she should be pregnant, the ultimate get from Daddy.

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