All Comments on 'An Untypcial Thursday Night'

Writer warn readers about the following topics in this 'story'

Point 1: No wife here just a slut girlfriend

Point 2: Men licking other Mens dicks Gay or Bi men do this straight men do not.

Ignore this story unless you enjoy these topics

Now she knows who to sleep around with.

How is this erotic?

I was able to skim read and confirm that this had absolutely no right to be in a Loving Wives section. No wife - just a girlfriend; lots of gay/bi action and, to be honest, no sign of either erotica or decent writing.

This is the kind of story that the single * is designed for even though it still gives a much too high a score.

Where are they? 1* for misrepresenting tale.

Let me iterate some of those " much, much worse" items.

* The lack of quotation marks.

* Run-on sentences.

* Run-on paragraphs.

The automatic reaction is to recommend an editor, but an editor should NOT be used to teach the writer basic English, only to catch a few mistakes. I don't expect polished, professional writing, but I expect something that indicates the writer passed grade school English. There is NO evidence of that is this mess.

Your birth date?

Learn how to write & where to put a full stop! This is absolute crap & drivel!!!