All Comments on 'An Unusual Request'

Rock hard all three pages

Too bad it's not real...👅

But the best are all made up.

Did disappoint me a little, she didn't want a

Cum shot photo on her boobs.

That's ALWAYS so sexy in pics.

Thanks.

Bob

You've got my vote.

Character evolution is an element of all good literature, and your writing is a fine example. It is very entertaining to experience the transformation of your central character. Nice job.

more chapters please.

The writing, was first rate, each screen made a picture in my mind. Thank you fou your effort.

Fun & funny!! I really enjoyed it. I do kind of wish she had told him why she was all of a sudden doing nude pics. It made it seem as if maybe she had something to hide. Keep writing!!

When a story leaves me smiling I know it was good, and this had me grinning from ear to ear, and wishing my wife was like that😉

I assume this was a one off, but I couldn't help feeling there was an underlying reason for her actions, maybe leaving it open for a possible second part?

Very good writing, great characters and hot.

Thanks.... Five stars.

bravo vraiment

Eleonor

Great story. I like how you placed the disclaimer seamlessly into the narration.

Interesting to have the story with the typical Brit male being prissy, and hesitant to admit what he wants sexually. LW stories with full participation of the man and woman are most erotic and interesting.

"Same thing, but take the other hand from your hip, and pull on your nipple, yes, and more, and more," they were interesting shots, and I could see she had a good grip on the nipple.'''''''' When you cut and paste it does Not enhance the story.

Great story, kinda surprised you haven't expanded o it