All Comments on 'Anal Sub for an A Ch. 01'

Your storyline seems well structured. Think the characters should be beefed up a bit more in their motivation for their actions. You're on your way with them and haven't fallen into the trap of starting sex scenes with only stick figure characters. I have enjoyed the first chapter and look forward to further adventures. Think the video camera was a great idea. Could you give the professor and student names next time?

Wish I could have earned some A's that way