All Comments on 'Anal with Georgie'

by QSQuinn

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Interesting premise.

Needs/lacks details.

Four stars.

ChefofthefutureChefofthefutureover 2 years ago

Please tell me there is another chapter coming…WOW

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I loved it!

DanDraperDanDraperover 2 years ago

Incredible story. I really enjoyed these characters and their relationship.

5stars.

pcman1950pcman1950over 2 years ago

Simply delicious. 'Nuf said. 5

lord_jefelord_jefeover 2 years ago

I rather liked it. I saw no issues with the details. Personally, I always ignore comments from anonymous people. I thought it was hot, & had a great pace to it as well. I'd be interested to see if it goes anywhere else should you choose to continue.

Ilovetophoto68Ilovetophoto68over 2 years ago

Fantastic story. Please write more

Freddog6601Freddog6601over 2 years ago

Full marks. Well done, with excellent characters.

BlackJackSteeleBlackJackSteeleover 2 years ago

Beautiful.

I love the mix love, lust and humour... and the imagery.

Well done.

MiddlesonMiddlesonover 2 years ago

I quite enjoyed the story also. Any Chance you could be convinced to add more to these characters. Follow the twins through college and afterwards?

Excellent. Hope to see more from you

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really good story that felt almost real. Loved the good-natured, Sorkin-esque intelligent banter that breathed life into the characters, and made the sex part both intimate and fun!

The only adjustments I would have made were a bit more specific on some aspects of physical description, and perhaps something else sexy before plunging straight into anal.

youjizz123youjizz123over 2 years ago

Both incredibly cute/sweet while also being super hot.

whacky76whacky76over 2 years ago

Five stars, I am glad I follow you, you never disappoint.

saltydocsaltydocover 2 years ago

Tried to give you 5 stars but they wouldn't change color! Loved this and look forward to more from you!

jim2545jim2545over 2 years ago

Very good story, I hope it continues...I love twin stories...

Mello_SixtyNineMello_SixtyNineover 2 years ago

Great story. Gave it 5-stars. My only constructive criticsm was since you rarely mentioned the brother's name, it was a little confusing who was talking at the beginning. You mentioned 'Georgie' repeatedly but it took you halfway down the first page before you mentioned 'John'. Other than that, the dialog during the sex scene didn't seemed forced and ridiculous like a lot of other stories posted on Lit.

The way you described Georgie painted a mental picture of Autumn Falls.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The word choices were superb if a little excessive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Incredible

Stex1978Stex1978over 2 years ago

Really enjoyed this story and hope you do more to continue it into John and Georgie’s life at college.

Dream59Dream59about 2 years ago

All I can say is, excellent!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Really nice premise.

Nicely full of details. Good step-by-step action.

Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great work ...needs a follow up !! ....Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story!! Needs mire between them!!

REALLY STUPID TO PURPOSELY SEPARATE TWINS FROM THE TIME THEY'RE BABIES!! IDIOT PARENTS

RamazaRamazaalmost 2 years ago

Great build up of the story, and I loved the trial and error approach of the twins, I agree with several of the other’s comments that we need to read more about them in collage

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASalmost 2 years ago

What does one say about siblings...twins...who love each other, and love each other up, so nicely, other than "Oh, My!!" Not just sex, but emotional attachment, shared by siblings, especially twins, which binds them together.

This is the type of story I really look forward to finding...and an author who knows "how" to write...

Thank You...and Five**5**Stars!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Now this was a nice story! When she whispered in his ear, I was right there in John's place! Very good indeed. Five stars!!

MrSilver69PegMrSilver69Pegabout 1 year ago

I really think you should continue this story with the two of them off at college! Please?

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I feel like they should have been together far earlier and experienced all their firsts together, especially given how stupidly close they were since like birth. It just felt like a perfect setup that was then ruined a bit by having others involved before their realization to be together. Maybe that's just me though.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Good premise.

Too automatic re sex.

And you wrote VICE when you meant VISE.

Four stars.

bseeker6969bseeker69692 months ago

Great story. You have to love it when family cums together:)

TeddDavidTeddDavid29 days ago

Outstanding Story.

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Hi all, Many people have asked when I will get back to writing, the truth is I am not sure right now. I have some other projects on the go that are consuming all my time and this area is suffering as a result. I hope to be back and doing some more writing soon, but I can't ma...

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