All Comments on 'And Here We Are Ch. 01'

Great! looking forward to the next installment! Thank you!

We all do it, but he knows he has to draw the line. Unlikely in these PC days but a lively story well written.

I get that this is FANTASY, I really do. BUT... There has to be some plausibility in ANY story (even if you're writing SciFi), or the reader's ability to suspend disbelief is hindered. We all know that, in our real world, as soon as Rob started spanking the first girl, the other 4 would be on their cell phones dialing 911. Fast forward 1 hour, and Rob's life is ruined FOREVER. This was a bigger issue for me that the numerous grammatical errors and tense/person switches.

"I was the Vice President of my own finance firm at 40"

Vice President ... of his own firm???

This obviously is not well thought out.

The other two comments confirmed my suspicions.

I loved everything about this story! I hope the rest are just as good! Great job

I had to read the first paragraph again to find out if this guy was a child molester or just a rapist. All of these girls lived locally and attended College at home with little to no parental supper vision. This is what child molester's and rapist's as well as pimps look for. My guess is the author has deep seeded mental issues in a best case scenario.

I loved this story ❤❤

An EXCELLENT fantasy story.